Poem #9 (March 11, 2024)
- Doxy Tetsuya
- Mar 13, 2024
- 1 min read
Updated: May 10, 2024
Field
thousands of roses
yet a spotlight of a rose
a snowy petal
with sweet scent of thorn, alas!
the hand plucks risking poor's luck
Notes
Tanka version! This was hard, I had to find ways to truly reach the 5-7-5-7-7 syllables. Pretty fun though. Next time I want to make a sonnet. It's pretty long but It'll be fun I can imagine.
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