Poem #12 (March 14, 2024)
- Doxy Tetsuya

- Mar 15, 2024
- 1 min read
Updated: May 10, 2024
Nightshade
scattered the scent of a sweet potato
crimson liquid etched within the roots
flays the shell under the willow
scatter the scent of a sweet potato
Unveils a belladonna wearing a halo
diffused with delirium, surrounding fruits
scattered the scent of a sweet potato
crimson liquid etched within the roots
Notes
Ayo! I'm kind of proud with this poem! Shiiii. First of all, this is the triolet style. It's complicated so if you don't know the style just google it. This was hard to make because the style is too limited but I still wanted to challenge myself by adding the symbolic + abstract vibes. I'm not sure if I attained it but this was pretty good. There's so many layers within the poem that you have to search the history of the few words to understand my message. Like a garlic, I really wanted to add more layers but the style is too limited. Hey, maybe next time hehe.
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