Poem #16 (March 18, 2024)
- Doxy Tetsuya

- Mar 21, 2024
- 1 min read
Updated: May 10, 2024
Melancholic Ode
dusk in a room, the boy stood
danced in a solo circle farandole
without music, breaks the thoughts for good
steps in goals, trips a ground hole
despair of perch, stands his way
sang a thought, the melancholic ode
grounded by the dreams of may
the hole is now his humble abode
dawn in the hole, the boy brood
danced a solo circle grandeur
without purpose, starts the thoughts of crude
climbs no soul, tries in another blur
Notes
Ode style. Once again this style is lyrical but I think failed to make it musical. Oh well, I'm still happy with this poem but this one was truly hard to make hahaha. My poem juices aren't the best these days, so this was a tough one.
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