Poem #3 (March 5, 2024)

Frozen

the feet walks

but hearts wandered and stops

frozen in forever

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Notes

This isn't haiku it's the Lune style (Jack Collom version). It's the 3-5-3 rule. 3 words in the first line, 5 words in the 2nd line, and 3 words in the third line. It's quite interesting. I might try the Kelly version, it's almost the same with Haiku except it's a 3-5-3 syllables instead of 5-7-5.